2021 was a hard year, so I make a video to cheer you up :)
Congratulation on completing CLANNAD Vietnamese patch after 12 years working hard! This is my first amv. Hope you like it and any advice would be appreciated. Thanks for watching :)
Better version here:
https://drive.google.com/file....sharing
From the technical side: 02:24 - 02:40 the ''memory inserts'' that appear are too small in size (circles/masks are too small), even when viewed on a large screen it is noticeable.
02:27 left - too violet.
And, in the AMV lacks at least some kind of ending.
Hope to see you editing more, with some practice you could do real nice stuff.
The first complaint I think is the clip is very static, personally I am not against this, it helps convey emotions better, but generally it is avoided to make viewers not bored.
The second is flapping mouths, I know you did it to portray state of slice of life, and it does the job well, but the viewers do not hear what they say!
The third is bad/generic ending, always strive to be positive in the end!
Good luck, awesome job!