 | [26.01.2019] -Ridiculous » BIPOLAR [Ridiculous] | TeaBlack
Newbie is for AMV lol. Well my style is not quite suitable for AMV cause that story telling is more import than editing flow to me. It's a big question i need to deal. However, it's enough that audience will like my work. It will push me forward. Thank you guys!
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Anejo
Thanks! i really need to learn more xD |
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 | [26.01.2019] Shiroi yoru » Kizmet [UnluckyArtist] | +
Impressive transitions
Colorful views
Excellent overall visual perception
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uncoordinated masks
You can see the hard work in this one.But not all the work pay off. |
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 | [26.01.2019] TeaBlack » BIPOLAR [Ridiculous] | -Ridiculous
Mercy! It seems to me that you're talented enough as a newbie author. btw your AMV style has impressed on me a lot. |
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| [26.01.2019] Shiroi yoru » Catastrophe [Giorgi ジオ] | +
Smooth movement of the shot
Interesting story arrangement
Reality shots were added
good match between 2D&3D
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Unsuccessful characterization
Uncoordinated colour
Slightly odd twixtor
But actually this's a good work |
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| [26.01.2019] -Ridiculous » BIPOLAR [Ridiculous] | Shiroi yoru
You mean the firework scene? Well it's a kind of metaphor, which is famous in Asia, especially Japanese Story. Just like sakura or anything else that carry the information of "transient". I really want to make a scene like these, where i separate those two girls though they were still under the same firework, and watching it independently. |
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| [26.01.2019] Shiroi yoru » BIPOLAR [Ridiculous] | +
Smooth storytelling
Excellent scene selection
Airy colour assortment
Exquisite emotional expression
High quality animation material （I love Liz and the Blue Bird）
Elegant atmosphere
High fit between the screen and music
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an unidentified shot in the middle
maybe it can add a little more conflict
Overall this's a a highly accomplished work although the plot's getting a bit lost in the middle. I think it's beautiful&nice enough.Good luck getting a high ranking |
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| [26.01.2019] -Ridiculous » BIPOLAR [Ridiculous] | TeaBlack
oop i have participated big contest 2018(the last place finally), akross is my first time. |
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 | [26.01.2019] Kroner » Catastrophe [Giorgi ジオ] | | Yeah I can agree saying iit’s Interesting. The first part more than the second one. I also thought that twixtor was pretty bad but after all it’s just one clip. That’s a good example of how anime edits and amvs (never known if we can call them like this) can cooperate. Not that it’s perfect ofc, but still I found it pretty interesting, Good luck |
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