 | [05.12.2012] Bluuwy » Living for a ghost [Bluuwy] | Thank you guys for all the feedback so far :) And... I thought I should clear up the storyline a bit (since I’m such a smartass and forgot to write it in the Author’s Comentary section //facepalm// ) (if you haven’t seen sao) So there’s this MMORPG they get trapped in until someone cleares all the levels (by killing the boos on each one ) & if you die in the game you die in reality.
So it starts off with the reminiscence of the boy entering the game (first 10 secs)...then a metaphor (I’ve added several through out the vid) of how he meets her and then loses her (meaning she is already dead when the action of the vid is set)...then this metaphor is presented as a dream from which he wakes up (sec 32) then i present his life without her...tho he keeps on seeing her everywhere...one day he takes a nap and dreams of her again...and in the dream he remembers how she died...or was murdered actually...and he searches for revenge...seasons change (1:24) while looking for the murderer...he finds him , challenges him , and barely wins...now he is able to log out of the virtual world (because the murderer was actually the final boss) and it ends with him vising her grave ;w; |
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 | [05.12.2012] akira02sum » Petal [Centurione] | | It seems to me that you told not a story but how beautiful blue is . And you told perfectly. I like blue. I like your amv. Thank you. |
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| [05.12.2012] akira02sum » The (Special) Girl's Feeling [Kazunyan] | Mr.Kさんが、こうしてコンテストに参加されたことは、嬉しい驚きでした。
可愛らしいラブ・ストーリー。観ていてほんわかしました。Mr.Kさんが伝えようとしたことは、しっかりと受け止めることができたと思います。私はそれが一番大切なことだと信じています。制作、お疲れさまでした。
次作へ向けて気付いたこと:
映像が余りにも一本調子です。曲がどんどん表情を変えていくのに、映像は変わらず。特に最低、間奏のところだけは、映像の「調子」を変えるべきだったと思います。もう一つ、曲とのシンクロで言えば、細かいところですが、例えばギターのフィルインは、私だったら活かすなあ。参考になれば嬉しいです。 |
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|  | Neon Genesis Evangelion, End of Evangelion |
|  | Rammstein - Mutter |
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