 | [16.11.2014] Elixir » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | InsanitySupporter @ 16 November 2014, 20:09 | | It would need more dynamic in order to be an action video. it may suit drama better. |
For some reason, I used to think of Drama as having an association with Romance, since it has something to do with them both being known as something emotional.
| InsanitySupporter @ 16 November 2014, 20:09 | | Try to not leave lipflaps in your video, if you can't avoid using a scene where characters are talking and you don't want to fix it, you can try leaving the voice and add subtitles saying something that goes along with your video, like an ending phrase or something. |
Yeah, it bothers me a lot now, and I regret it heavily. I'm pretty sure it's the cardinal sin for Akross videos: leaving in even the slightest of errors.
Thanks for the comments!  |
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 | [16.11.2014] InsanitySupporter » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | It would need more dynamic in order to be an action video. it may suit drama better.
I loved the song, I think it fits the anime you used, buy maybe it can be used with another series that you like the most.
Try to not leave lipflaps in your video, if you can't avoid using a scene where characters are talking and you don't want to fix it, you can try leaving the voice and add subtitles saying something that goes along with your video, like an ending phrase or something.
Techinically, isn't impresive but isn't bad.
Overall, I liked it. |
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 | [16.11.2014] Animated » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | Σοβαρα τωρα, καθεσαι και χαλιεσαι αφου τελειωσες το συγκεκριμενο βιντεο?? Και εισαι και 16 χρονων! Οχι μια και δυο ιντσες πιο πανω, του χρονου πας για finals... πολυ καλη δουλεια. Ξεκινα τα multi anime απο δω και στο εξης με ενα μικρο concept και εξισου γαματη μουσικη, τα linear AMVs με ενα ανιμε μονο θυμιζει πολυ 2005 :D Ενα 7.5/10 απο μενα, εχεις τεραστια περιθωρια βελτιωσης! |
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 | [16.11.2014] Insofistikerad » Moon Powder [mastamind] | Like mentioned earlier its a really good combination of video and music, Perfect songchoice for this video!
Overall entertainment 8/10. Really liked the video!
good job and good luck in the compeititon :) |
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 | [16.11.2014] ASiR » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | Кроме спецэффектов ничего заслуживающего внимания не заметил, к сожалению. Экшен часто похож был на случайный набор картинок стянутых вместе различными эффектами.
За техническую составляющую честно свои 6/10 ты заработал. |
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 | [16.11.2014] flaffi » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | Чо-т какой-то не экшоновый экшон... не знаю... у меня восприятие такое было, диссонанс музыки с видео... |
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| [16.11.2014] Elixir » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | :
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| AnimeFanaticBoy @ 16 November 2014, 17:21 | -Not sure if this could be exactly an Action. It kind of feels weak. But as a drama, good one.
-It has some nice scenes in it. While not enough for an action, it still has its moments.
-The ending was a bit confusing and the lip flap you have before the credits it-s a no. You could have fixed that
-the video and music go in a same way, so we're fine there.
-you need to improve the zooms next time, some of them needed to be smoother |
Thank you, |
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 | [16.11.2014] Maniaki » Moon Powder [mastamind] | despite everything it was pretty fun!~ good job
Spoiler: the beginning scared me since it looked extremely like one of my projects o.o
Good luck o.= |
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 | [16.11.2014] AnimeFanaticBoy » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | Since you nicely asked for it, then here we go:
-Not sure if this could be exactly an Action. It kind of feels weak. But as a drama, good one.
-It has some nice scenes in it. While not enough for an action, it still has its moments.
-The ending was a bit confusing and the lip flap you have before the credits it-s a no. You could have fixed that
-the video and music go in a same way, so we're fine there.
-you need to improve the zooms next time, some of them needed to be smoother
And from my part that's all. Not bad |
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