 | [20.12.2014] InsanitySupporter » Do You Love Me? [kurosakibruno] | You need to work in some technical aspects.
Also, sometimes the scenes didn't merged that well.
Your story-telling isn't bad, I think you can do it better, but is ok.
I'm sure you can make a masterpiece. this was good for a first try in a hard genre.
Keep working, I want to see your next piece. |
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 | [20.12.2014] akira02sum » Do You Love Me? [kurosakibruno] | The storyline is easy to understand. I got what you told. But you're not good at how to tell a story. Your video is beautiful, but plain.
However I felt that you had done your best. It's most important. Good luck! |
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 | [20.12.2014] AnimeFanaticBoy » Do You Love Me? [kurosakibruno] | actually it wasnt bad for a first try in the genre, but there are several things you'll have to have in mind everythime you want to make a crossover:
-Consider the animation: Without watching the Making Of I could easily notice every change in the video when the success of a crossover is to make these changes at least unnoticeable for the viewers.
-The scene selection: at some points it feels like you were just mixing the scenes from the separate shows in order to develop the story, but there wasn't an element that could connect both plots. Like if there were two different plots
-The technique. it's so-so the one you used, but not bad, it didnt affect the development of the video |
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