| [28.12.2014] danparthenis » OverWritten [DanParthenis] | Thank you all so much for your criticism, I will make sure to keep all your advice in mind on my next project :) aaaand il try to make my videos a bit more lengthy from now on XD this was my first attempt at this style of editing so I hope to get better at it |
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| [28.12.2014] micho91 » OverWritten [DanParthenis] | I saw some comments about the genre: drama vs action. I think it's a little of both. I also think that the video was a little bit short to actually be able to say if it's action or drama. while looking at it I thought: wow, this might be good / soon I will be able to see the storyline or the connection of everything happening in the video. aaand then. the outro came. the editing is pretty good and I actually wanted to watch the whole video for once haha. the video made you curious about: what's next? ^^
I hope you get some good points in this competition! :D |
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| [28.12.2014] Samai » OverWritten [DanParthenis] | Эм(((... тут только техника и даже хорошая, есть синхра, какой то сюжетик, но... не зацепило вообще 7/10 |
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| [28.12.2014] Samai » Ripped Suffer [Akito - Neto] | Не увидела синры, в некоторых местах слишком светлой сделали момента дорогой автор из-за чего не понимаешь че вообще там. Как то начало понравилось, а потом началась какая та неразбериха и все такое. ставлю 6/10 |
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| [27.12.2014] AnimeFanaticBoy » bitter sis love [FY.DUCK] | I don't know what to say for this video: In a hand there are some ideas that makes me think you really wanted to make an Oreimo video using only that source. Then it was like you wanted to do the mix, but couldn't find enough scenes, so you decided to go back to the Oreimo video idea. In the other hand, the long scenes and the effects which weren't bad at some moments, but yo will have to keep an eye next time, specially the masking,
About genres: Romance. It could even fit in Fun, but it's a Romance one |
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