| [13.12.2015] chaossparky » Sour drinks [ChaosSparky] | InsanitySupporter @ 13 December 2015, 11:00 | The song fits the anime, but you lack execution: this needs more sync and flow, and a wiser selection of scenes (you use fast scenes at slow parts of the song, for example) could even turn this into a noticeable psychedelic work, you can make something in the fun category, but a psychedelic one with this source seems easier and more interesting |
Thank's for the feedback. Yeah, I get what you're saying about sync and flow. My editing's a bit hyperactive in general here :/. Although on scene selection, I wanted to stay with the meaning/feeling of the song (getting drunk at a party), which is why I went with random scenes for the most part. I didn't want it to make sense. Saying that, I did try a narrative at the beginning (Song starts after Naota takes a drink, in the quiet bits at the beginning he's getting more and more drunk/high, pretty wasted in the chorus), but it mostly faded by the end and didn't have much of a presence. I also tried matching a few scenes at the beginning with the lyrics, but that faded off too. Looking back, it was mostly a mess. The ending came out of nowhere, and the last chorus was shoddily done. I thought I'd upload it anyway. |
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| [13.12.2015] Armed » 'Infinite Power' One Punch Man AMV [ClarenceOng] | Good m/v. First 20 second were perfect and then you got tired:р Да первые 20 сек были превосходны, дальше автор видимо подумал, что зрители не заметят разницы с простым наложением видео. И правда не заметили. |
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| [13.12.2015] MesoGear » Sour drinks [ChaosSparky] | не, в принципе забавный клип, музыка и исходник тащат
Armed @ 12 December 2015, 16:56 | Весь смысл в описании клипа |
но ведь тема не раскрыта... |
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| [13.12.2015] DEDninja » Gun not for kids [MikuriAki] | Отличная работа! Своеобразная конечно, но, несомненно, такого уровня клипы и должны быть на этом конкурсе. Мои 8.8/10 |
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| [13.12.2015] Arkvein_lv » Письмо [Darksss 73] | Классно, посмотрел с удовольствием!! Большое спасибо за работу p.s. Только, по-моему, человек перед смертью не будет переживать из-за таких мелочей, как обычная любовь. Эта тема, конечно, - тайна, чужая душа все-таки - потемки, но, мне кажется, предсмертное состояние намного глубже безответной любви, предательства и похожих чувств. |
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| [13.12.2015] InsanitySupporter » Sour drinks [ChaosSparky] | The song fits the anime, but you lack execution: this needs more sync and flow, and a wiser selection of scenes (you use fast scenes at slow parts of the song, for example) could even turn this into a noticeable psychedelic work, you can make something in the fun category, but a psychedelic one with this source seems easier and more interesting. |
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