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[02.01.2018] buggy » Sincerely [Coach]
MrNosec, the type of guy to write a book describing a single frame :laugh:
[02.01.2018] MrNosec » Sincerely [Coach]
This was a pleasant vid.

I'll be quite picky with little things here because I think you have lots of potential and don't want to see you making the same minor flaws again, but then again this might be very subjective since it's my personal opinion, so I don't wish or expect you to interpret and follow what I'll say here literally, just take it as a brainstorming session.

I enjoyed the "3D" look of the intro (from the start till 13 secs), it feels clean and the edge duplication effect looks trippy, even if it feels way more elaborate than the rest of the video, the horizontal wave warp was a neat way to sync the distinct sounds, even if it feel rather bare-bones by itself, maybe animating a property like slightly lowering the gamma or adding the tint effect up to 40% to desaturate the image a little when the wave warp kicks in could have made it feel a little more organic.

At 5 seconds, making both the radial scene and the bg warped looks nice, but as the radial scene is filling the screen, and the second time you increase the ammount of the wave warp, making only the bg exponentially warped with the crescendo muffled noise-like sound and leaving the radial scene which is now filling the entire screen untouched would add to the clean digital look and would accentuate the impression of depth, which that segment already has with the duplicated edges.

The fact that there are two noses and two mouths in this scene makes it feel out of place like straight out of an intense psychedelic video, it worked well on the very previous scene because it was more of a scenery shot, but it's not as effective on a closeup of someones face.

I also didn't understand why you pushed out the edges of the scenes like in 0:07 and 0:13 when there's no sound cue calling for it, it's not even a transition, it just happens and it goes back to the way it was, it just feels rather unjustified to me, no matter how good it looks.

The only time you used twixtor in this video at 0:31 (as far as I could tell) seems kinda weird, there's something wrong with your settings, either your input framerate was off or maybe not every repeated frame was deleted successfully, because as you can see if you go through it frame by frame, it stutters randomly sometimes, and it even jolts back in time during 1 frame, which I suspect is caused by setting twixtor to use the GPU, which isn't recommended, but im not entirely sure if that's what caused it.

This global vertical noise wave warp looking effect used throughout the vast majority during the rest of the video, although it's not too distracting or intrusive, it's main problem is that it's inconsistent, sometimes it syncs to the first two sounds like in 1:12, sometimes it syncs to the ecos of the first two sounds instead, like in 2:32, and other times the effect just ignores the song altogether and turns on in random spots or stays off. I believe that, If one's aim is too represent the song visually, the first time an effect is used when a certain sound plays, that effect should always accompany the respective sound, until it gets overlapped by another more relevant segment or dies out altogether.

There are also other inconsistencies with the beat sync, for example, in 1:32, you switch scenes when there's a kick 3 times in a row, but then you start ignoring the kicks altogether and start syncing with the lyrics instead, maybe adding a very subtle effect like making the edges of the image darker or zooming in 2% when every kick hits while syncing the rest to the lyrics would make it feel more homogeneous.

There's not much else I can really say about the video, I didn't expect to write a comment this long, even if all I talked about was technical shenanigans that I think could be improved, in the end I think it's a cool video and the effort shows. Looking forward to your upcoming works, I promise I won't type boring essays on those :wink:
[02.01.2018] peco@mv » Sincerely [Coach]
The beginning part of the transition makes me bad,there have some blur transitions u can change with the light material,and after the 01:15 u should pick the more strong scene cuz the beats is rly strong,but not a bad video good luck man
[02.01.2018] Лисёнок-тян » Sincerely [Coach]
7/10
[02.01.2018] Лисёнок-тян » The rainy city [LIULIMENGYUAN]
6/10
[02.01.2018] Ell » Fragments of life [KSANDR]
хоть и я не смотрел Koe no Katachi но все было понятно. (наверное буду смотреть) музыка выбрано очень хорошо,
поставлю оценку за идею за эмоций 9/10

удачи в дальнейшем.
[02.01.2018] Axiles » Sincerely [Coach]
8./10 :smile:
[02.01.2018] Ell » Broken Samurai [RaZor]
надо посмотреть этот аниме для понимание.
наверное будет легче понимать тем кто посмотрел.
главное в этом AMV эмоции.
для тех кто не смотрел
конечно это AMV будет скучным и непонятным
( я не смотрел) :facepalm: )
но видно что потрудился и качественно все собрал. это достойно оченке.
удачи в дальнейшем. 7/10
[02.01.2018] kain4ig » Broken Samurai [RaZor]
Всем спасибо за новые комментарии. Жду, продолжение еще новых комментариев .
Thank you all for the new comments. I'm waiting, the continuation of more new comments.
[02.01.2018] iMCoach » Sincerely [Coach]
 KSANDR @ 02 January 2018, 05:50 

English was easy to understand :) thank you for the criticism and I will work harder to make something more consistent in the future any other thoughts or advice?
[02.01.2018] KSANDR » Sincerely [Coach]
the first 15 seconds of the clip from 30 seconds of the beginning - you took the preset ENVATO, but could't use it normally. if you look closely, you can see twins. at 20 seconds, can be seen as the left of the screen disappears superimposed footage.
for youtube is the norm, but for the competition over this it was necessary to spend more time.
my english bad. sorry))
[02.01.2018] iMCoach » Sincerely [Coach]
KSANDR
Do you feel it should have overall been toned down some or is it at particular points for you?
[02.01.2018] KSANDR » Sincerely [Coach]
too much useless fifects! it's look like: see how i can use ENVATO
[02.01.2018] iMCoach » Sincerely [Coach]
I'd like to add what my story was here for anyone who may wonder Since it's my first time creating an AMV for a big contest after having been editing for 9 months now just in case the story doesn't come through clearly.
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Sincerely it was born from the quote by Shakespeare "Time is out of joint" I decided to use that as the base with this show because it's often quoted through out it.. What I chose to do was make a story of two heroes that never actually become heroes. Two boys embark on a journey filled with rage from the loss of the girl they both loved as the world around them is crumbling in destruction. The two knowing it's not what the one they loved would want to see are unable to cope with her death and mourn properly. When the main character finally has a moment of revelation about how deep in the pit they've both gone together on their path of self gratifying vengeance it's far to late and rather than living up to what they were supposed to be and saving the world they end up losing their lives having done nothing but fill an already terror filled world with only more fuel to ride it's way towards ending.
[01.01.2018] MesoGear » Bleach AMV - Айзен [Великий Змей]
 krosha @ 01 January 2018, 20:27 
явно не уровень конкурса

лол, а это не конкурсный клип
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