okhostok Thank you. I'm a novice. It's really helpful to hear such a great suggestion! I will continue to work hard next year or other games! Thank you again for typing so many words! Thank you very much.
Everyone experiencing glitches should watch alternative version.
You have creativity and you can think outside the box. I really liked the fact that you tried to interact with the viewer (instead of just showing) and used things that other editors do not use. )
Some notes about this work: 1) You should properly encode your video. In standard version, there are a lot of glitches, especially, in transitions. 2) There are a lot of inaccuracies in this work, for example: a) At 2:00, the trailing stars must be under sky, not on top of that. b) Use more capitalizing (It is better to capitalize if you are unsure), this may ruin whole mood. c) You could have used something else instead of face blurring, it is lazy method and does not look well. d) At 1:32, inaccurate movement of the text, you should learn how to use trackers for these kind of movements. e) There are a lot of cheap and unnecessary effects. 3) Do not write the contents of the clip to the description. Why do we need to watch clip, if we can just read the description and predict what will happen?
As a summary: I will be honest, it is a bit weak video, but it is not your mistake, it is just lack of experience. Wish you good luck in the future.
Hi, I've seen the video several times... it has many rendering errors perhaps.... the faces covered with the blur 1:26 - 1:30 ruin the originality that you want the mask 3:03 doesn't fit at all.... on this dense analysis you should give more attention to the effects and the masks that you apply good luck for the contest.....
Is a story very sad, I like you production skills,like something....how to say.... Elegant and beautiful, but without losing the impact. Yep something like that...
Darksss 73 Hi, I confess that in certain places it lacks sync I absolutely do not deny it is perfect! XD, but I'm very fixated to aim with lips maybe this was the penalty in certain points, obviously because of the lips mechanical mouths and you see a bit detached from the audio synchronization I could have opted for some scenes I have masks, you're right! great advice I'll keep it in mind!
Если это либс - то я космонавт на Юпитере и шлю вам пламенный привет . Хлопорты (или так называймый либс) конечно сбивают вес настрой в данной работе. Лучше бы автор заменил их на какой нибудь экшен или же маски .
Well to say that the editing is stupid and I find it no sense given the type lol XD comedy and fun second, I could agree with you that I have to work more on the choice of some clips where the opening of the mouths is really very difficult to find the right selection, that said thanks to the sarcastic and not ironic wish.
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Thanks for the feedback, yes unfortunately I have not been able to do better, from a spoiled dynamism will read because of the mechanical wound mouths opening I will select more carefully the selection of the scenes with regard to lips, thanks for these tricks I will keep them in mind!.
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Fynjy @ 19 December 2019, 08:49
I didn't think it was appropriate to cut the song because I didn't need to.
Не уловил суть. Чем то на психоделику смахивает , но из-за этих глаз совсем ничего не понятно. Их очень много. Зачем их столько , что этим автор хотел сказать может найдутся те , кто познал дзен и дадут мне объективное объяснение. Да и музыка монотонная. Такая музыка будто запирает воображение автора , не давая ему показать свои возможности в полную силу. Интересный стиль. Слишком ядовитые местами цвета. Пурпурные или розовые. Желаю автору удачи. Пока все , может венусь позже и пересмотрю.Хотя хватило и одного раза. С Энкиду не общаетесь случайно ?