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[07.02.2021] Nards » Aviator [FT]

no poem here.

i loved this a ton.

10/10

+1 for makin' me feel somethin

11/10

[07.02.2021] Nards » Diklony [Darksss 73]

elfen lied
elfen truther
drake & josh
smish and smosh

[07.02.2021] Nards » You look so happy [W.P]

you gambled
i babbled
fortnite! fortnite!
my boys dabbled

[07.02.2021] Nards » Revitalize [TheFinalDistrict]

gundam suit
i am mute
hear my voice
you can't noice my noice

[07.02.2021] Nards » Dark Olympus [DAPSEpako]

slow mo jam
peanut butter and ham
i needn't do my homework
spam o' spam

[07.02.2021] Nards » Zero To Hero [veravero]

no poem here.

this is so fuckin dope 10/10

+1 for OPM

11/10

[07.02.2021] Nards » Another Place [Tommy]

to sleep
to dream
i took a dump
break my ears if i listen to lil pump

[07.02.2021] Nards » THE TRUTH [gtqwe]

don't lie
my hips 'o my hips
como se llama
please call my mama

[07.02.2021] Nards » Sundered [Akarena]

out of time
poopy slime
i drank water
hairy plopper

[07.02.2021] Nards » GODFALL [athrun]

sushi dookie
smell my fart
taste thy art
you did your part

[07.02.2021] Лисёнок-тян » GODFALL [athrun]

7/10

[07.02.2021] Лисёнок-тян » Trinity [Squardz]

6/10

[07.02.2021] W.P » You look so happy [W.P]

okhostok
（看上去中文翻译的效果还不错）
很遗憾的是我确实不是一个很能享受乐趣的作者。
我是一个想要做出更好-最好作品的作者，但每次在关键的时候都差了那么一截，从未让自己满意过，本次的作品也同样。
这种想要认真做些什么最终却什么都没做好的感受很糟，不过就像你说的，也许是时候认清现实，当个“还不错”为止的作者了。