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[04.12.2013] andrewbee » Sorrowful Life [Acton70]

You seem to have good clip selection and editing skills. You rhythm and pacing are also quite good but story-telling skill is severely lacking. It affects the emotion and as a viewer, I am not invested in the characters you are portraying. You will absolutely get better because you are not distracted by cramming effects but making a good edit that flows.
You have to focus on how to build and tell a story.When to introduce a character, Why the character is sad, What are the longing. how tragic was their journey?

Wish you the best.

[04.12.2013] andrewbee » Human Trancition [ACRLover]

You disappointed me right from the start.You had an interesting beginning then you show flowers for the powerful opening lyrics! 'What if i wanted to break" and you show f****** FLOWERS!!! I was hoping you redeem yourself but you didnt! You have an awesome material to work with but failed to tap into its potential.

You need to work on your story telling skill before editing skill. If this was about Jaegar, you should have built the amv around him. If this was about the corps, the same treatment focusing on key players. To me it felt like, like the City was the story.

Research! Watch more good amvs and workout the structure and be better!

[04.12.2013] andrewbee » Spill a Will [9eek]

I think you had a great song choice but you need to work on building your story and editing. There was a hint of good clip selection and arrangement between 2:15-2:25.
You dont always have to hit all the beats in a track. Build a rythmn and momentum but dont lose focus on the story or concept behind the amv. STORY IS KING!

[04.12.2013] andrewbee » Sket Brothers [2ndState]

While this isn't original, it is certainly entertaining. You clips selection was spot on in certain aspects of the trailer. The way you introduced some of your masked -in characters was a bit jarring at times but I enjoyed the concept.

[04.12.2013] theredflash66 » Spill a Will [9eek]

The video is meh

[04.12.2013] IGORGOD » Spill a Will [9eek]

Более-менее доставило, не понравились шрифты(особенно сильно вначале клипа). Поставил 7.2

[04.12.2013] Anicsi » what is Life [Mariel]

The concept was quite nice, and i can tell that you tried really hard :) To give you some advice, work on the designs/presentations. Sometimes less is more. The background you used didn't blend in well with the rest of the scenes which were left without color correction (I also didn't get why some of the clips were masks and on that paper BG and other scenes weren't? not that everything has to be masks, but then try to lessen the contrast more) and the shadow/light combination around the masks is a real pity, because it makes them look so unclean. Clean masking is really difficult, but it's also really worth it if it's presented the right way. Same with the text, the design was just out of place. It'd maybe also had more impact if you had chosen a music that changed over time, like this it was a bit repetitive. Either way, lovely video, and as I said, I liked the concept ^^

[04.12.2013] Anicsi » Spill a Will [9eek]

Hm, i am a bit confused, like... okay it's action, so there doesn't have to be a super deep story behind it, but even for action, a bit of plot (or concept) is really important and I couldn't catch any of that in your video? Uhm, and then f.e. the slower part at 1:45, it'd have been really nice to have a change of mood here, something serious or slowing down, but the clips you used made it look a bit ridiculous. Maybe that's just the anime, though. Well, the editing generally was good, i just don't think it's a good idea to focus on lip synching in action videos :)