If you are making lip sync, be sure it's perfect. Otherwise it's a fail like in this AMV. Opening and ending connected to main part awfully. And it was obvious that you just can't handle such a difficult music, try using something less complicated. As for anime, using Bleach is a minus unless your AMV is good enough to say: "That's how you make Bleach AMV." Keep working, good luck next time.
Keep working, good luck next time.