@leegf watch the alternative version the audio is much better, probably a compression issue ;)
i liked this vid, def seemed like you had fun with it. there are areas to improve, like the first bit seems to be entirely from the OP and the sync could be tightened up. one tip i would say is to try to keep action flow going by avoiding cutting to a static scene in the middle of fast moving scenes. but i think a lot can be learned just by making more videos. keep at it! :D
Well... it's bad. Sync is weak(if there's any). Some random scenes are just scaterred around without that much of connection. It needs a lot of editing. As person below mentioned : "still some basics here to improve". There's something bothering me. It seems some scenes or rather the whole clip is zoomed in. I wonder why did you have to do that? It only makes things worse. Oh, and the quality of music is extremely poor. I've searched for the song on other resources to check it out. The difference is overwhelming. I wonder why you didn't pay attention to it too.
все те же кадры
все то же мясо
без смысла
без сюжета
без синхры
можно сказать прямо на глазах
ни синхры, нифига...
Стёрто на 24-й секунде.
It's a bit better but still there's an issue with that.
i liked this vid, def seemed like you had fun with it. there are areas to improve, like the first bit seems to be entirely from the OP and the sync could be tightened up. one tip i would say is to try to keep action flow going by avoiding cutting to a static scene in the middle of fast moving scenes. but i think a lot can be learned just by making more videos. keep at it! :D
Sync is weak(if there's any). Some random scenes are just scaterred around without that much of connection. It needs a lot of editing. As person below mentioned : "still some basics here to improve".
There's something bothering me. It seems some scenes or rather the whole clip is zoomed in. I wonder why did you have to do that? It only makes things worse.
Oh, and the quality of music is extremely poor. I've searched for the song on other resources to check it out. The difference is overwhelming. I wonder why you didn't pay attention to it too.