The vertical directional blur you used for transitions started getting old pretty fast and felt unnecessary, because most scenes where it was used didn't have any significant movement to justify the use of "pseudo-motion blur". It also has a serious lack of progression, after 0:41 the rest of the video is pretty much the same, everything feels predictable and empty.
It just didn't work for me, maybe it's because I dislike the song (even though I tried to ignore that), or maybe it's because it feels like a beta version of "Gloria Fortis Miles" by Rider4Z. Nothing stands out, but that's probably what you were going for anyway.
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а так - неразбериха.
Хорошо засинхренное бессмысленное мочилово.
Death_Kn1ght - прости, но твоё творение действительно описывается одним коротким словом "мясо".
It also has a serious lack of progression, after 0:41 the rest of the video is pretty much the same, everything feels predictable and empty.
It just didn't work for me, maybe it's because I dislike the song (even though I tried to ignore that), or maybe it's because it feels like a beta version of "Gloria Fortis Miles" by Rider4Z. Nothing stands out, but that's probably what you were going for anyway.
Good luck though.