I am quite torn about this video. It was nice, but I think it might have been better without the scribble effects and instead to have focused on better flow. Why? Well, the scribble effects were so distracting to me... I kept thinking they must have a deeper reason, something to add to the storyline. But instead I felt like it was more of a: 'what effects can I add to make this video stand out from the rest?' And I think that should never be the reason for effects. Visually the effects are nice and very well done, but as I said, if you take them away, you have your average Wolf Children AMV with no twist on the story at all. And the effects are also not consistent enough to add to the video as a whole, because sometimes you have them there, then you don't, then suddenly they appear again... Don't take this the wrong way, I can see you worked hard on this, but as a concept it wasn't convincing enough for me. Good luck in the contest, though :)
easily my favorite video of the contest so far. although i think the second half was weaker than the first and felt a bit rushed. that said, really enjoyable and great job overall. 8ish/10
sucubus
lmfao what