First half was looking good, in my opinion. I feel as if you lost it after that. Also, a lot of that overlapping dialogue was a turn off for me, I could barely even hear the actual music in the second half. Overall, for me, it wasn't bad, but it wasn't on an MLG Quickscoping level either. Good luck.
When done nicely, using the anime's original audio with the music can be amazing. This didn't quite get there for me. But your scene selection was lovely, and your mood was spot-on. The lack of synthesis with the audio is what turned me off tbh. But overall nice job, 8/10 seems appropriate :) Good luck!!
Edit: Dec 10/2014
Im joking, i was trolling before without watching it, just watched it now.
Amazing text camera and gripping atmosphere! 10/10 from me!
оно бессмысленно
оно както одной рукой неудобно
pretty cool overall =) gl!