since you dont have any info about the video let's start with the first impression:
-It's the first video. No sense of synch, subs in it, not an appropiate ending and also a hard audio cut are in it. Ghostframes in it also. Keep practicing dude, you might improve in the future
-It's the first video. No sense of synch, subs in it, not an appropiate ending and also a hard audio cut are in it. Ghostframes in it also. Keep practicing dude, you might improve in the future