well finally i decided to participate in akross, and here is my amv. I got the inspiration from amv "De:Light ",which is one of my favorites,and i try to make a "action-story" style video. Still lacking experience, i hope u can give me some advice.
I don't know why people can't give advice when someone clearly asks for it, but, uh, okay, then I'll make the start I guess. First of all I think it's a pretty neat attempt when you say you're still lacking experience. While it was lacking, it was still obvious what you wanted to show. So much for that. I think mostly you need to work on movement (things as camera shakes, zooms and panning) and transitions. Your video is lacking dynamics (not in the scenes itself, but what you 'made' of them), for a song with such heavy beats and synthesizers. Secondly, when you switch between 'dimensions', the dimension of the 'game' and the 'player'/controlling person, you need to have a clearer vision and concept about the surroundings and how you portray them in an interesting way. Similar to a storyboard in a movie, i guess. Think of it as different camera angles and shots. It's hard to explain, but you'll probably get it when you watch a couple of more advanced videos and gain experience ^^ Anyway, this was still not bad, keep it up!
Oh yeah and you have to look into Aspect Ratio. I'm pretty sure the footage is actually wide-screen, isn't it?
I think you have to work on your dynamics and effects with this kind of songs, I know you can improve a lot (:
Thanks for ur long comments, i got ur points :)
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ЗЫ аспект =_=
First of all I think it's a pretty neat attempt when you say you're still lacking experience. While it was lacking, it was still obvious what you wanted to show. So much for that. I think mostly you need to work on movement (things as camera shakes, zooms and panning) and transitions. Your video is lacking dynamics (not in the scenes itself, but what you 'made' of them), for a song with such heavy beats and synthesizers. Secondly, when you switch between 'dimensions', the dimension of the 'game' and the 'player'/controlling person, you need to have a clearer vision and concept about the surroundings and how you portray them in an interesting way. Similar to a storyboard in a movie, i guess. Think of it as different camera angles and shots. It's hard to explain, but you'll probably get it when you watch a couple of more advanced videos and gain experience ^^
Anyway, this was still not bad, keep it up!
Oh yeah and you have to look into Aspect Ratio. I'm pretty sure the footage is actually wide-screen, isn't it?
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