Pretty cool effects. Didnt really like the text, and there was some random effects that felt like it was not needed. The chorus part of the song was your strong point. Decent video, good luck. ^^
your editing is pretty decent, but the over layer you've added on top just makes it look messy. Far too many effects thrown in that didn't seem necessary, and the text just seems out of place. Overall, I would give it a solid 6.4. Without the messy effects, around 7+.
