NaXeL13, your main mistake is the song you've chosen, it has a difficult broken rythme and if you want to make a good AMV to this song you must be a lord of synchronization. It seemed to me that video and song were unrelated. Moreover the video was too short, I couldn't find any plot and I've think you've overused effects especially the shimmering. Sorry if it was a bit harsh, I hope I didn't offend you
замыленно и скучно..