nothing is random. i hate explaining myself, but why i use that effect only there is because i needed to show that he's losing his grip on reality (there's a conflict inside him, hence the mirror) that leads to his suicide. same thing with the girl shown with the rorschach test scenes and the way she sees the guy (the punpun face) which leads to her suicide as well i guess you could say this is a fucked up romeo and juliet
I like the idea, but execution not so much. I mean, the AMV is nice, but it could be better. Your storytelling is not the best. Sometimes it's better to have the storytelling a bit more loose, but this AMV, I think, depends on how the viewer sees the story, so it's not the case. If the viewer doesn't understand what's happening, the AMV loses half of interest. Some effects felt kind of random (0:46 - 0:48). It would have felt better if you had used it more often. The anime choice is not the best imo, Shouko's expression doesn't change at all, so it doesn't help with the storytelling as well. And as I said, the idea is pretty nice and I like it overall. The sync is good too and some parts look really pretty (the very start for example).
клип действительно выгодно выделяется на фоне других работ по этому исходнику,музыка с видео отлично сочетаются на мой вкус)не совсем только понял некоторые сюжетные моменты,видимо надо пересмотреть.
Your best video buggy! The only thing that pisses me off in this video is the shape of the particles you used to disperse the character in some scenes ... I believe you did this with a native effect of after effects, but I'd suggest you use the plugin trapcode particular in the next one as it's so much prettier! GJ :D
Ну, узнаваемый авторский визуальный стиль и отсутствие эксплуатация сюжета аниме, выгодно выделяют эту работу на фоне толпы других работ, на этот исходник.
Я лично слово "Punpun" увидел только в этих вот комментариях. О каких параллелях тут вообще можно говорить, если я знать не знаю что это такое и у меня после просмотра единственное логичное предположение - "у девочки при виде этого парня были постоянные кошмарные глюки. отсюда и пошла вся драма." Автор слишком перемудрил.
nothing is random. i hate explaining myself, but why i use that effect only there is because i needed to show that he's losing his grip on reality (there's a conflict inside him, hence the mirror) that leads to his suicide.
same thing with the girl shown with the rorschach test scenes and the way she sees the guy (the punpun face) which leads to her suicide as well
i guess you could say this is a fucked up romeo and juliet
Your storytelling is not the best. Sometimes it's better to have the storytelling a bit more loose, but this AMV, I think, depends on how the viewer sees the story, so it's not the case. If the viewer doesn't understand what's happening, the AMV loses half of interest.
Some effects felt kind of random (0:46 - 0:48). It would have felt better if you had used it more often.
The anime choice is not the best imo, Shouko's expression doesn't change at all, so it doesn't help with the storytelling as well.
And as I said, the idea is pretty nice and I like it overall. The sync is good too and some parts look really pretty (the very start for example).
The only thing that pisses me off in this video is the shape of the particles you used to disperse the character in some scenes ...
I believe you did this with a native effect of after effects, but I'd suggest you use the plugin trapcode particular in the next one as it's so much prettier! GJ :D
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Я лично слово "Punpun" увидел только в этих вот комментариях.
О каких параллелях тут
Автор слишком перемудрил.
Кстати, на сценах с 1.23 вспомнился опенинг сериала "Тьма"
да там и не особо
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