Watched it a first time, was confused, but I liked it. Read your story and then watched it again, wow. Nicely done. Though if I have to say one thing, it's that the amv would have turned out better if the story was better represented in the actual video. Other than that, nice job; simple, sweet, perfect. 9
Стори получилась своеобразная (1 день из жизни школьника? О_о), задумка может и есть но она очень уныла. Но синхра очень порадовала, довольно грамотна и без особых ляпов как мне кажется. Впрочем других эффектов не наблюдал.... 6.8/10
It's a pre-romance concept, even far away from it. Without giving too much proper information as well.
It happens.
It's not a novel contest, if you couldn't tell it via your AMV then it doesn't count.
too simple...BUT, I like it
gj
Read the novel.